Written in the stars - sketch

OK, so this was the original to 'written in the stars', I was gunna keep this image as it was or colour this image with the correct colours but decided this would be a good chance to practice with a few different colours so I created something a bit more colourful lol :L
I uploaded both because I thought you should decide which one you like the best (personally I prefer this one, mainly because I suck a colouring haha)
Coloured version --> [link]

Enjoy

Links to some of my other work ----->

Bad Boys [link]
Meanwhile...On Lights bed... [link]
Smile L... [link]
LxLight bj? [link]
LxLight [link]